- To my point of bed is where we don’t interact with the outside world consciously, Nathan said to him bed’s where he thought/worried, even in dreams, we were pulling from our life. I did have considered that we might still be thinking/interacting with the outside world in dreams, however, I still think that’s unconscious and they weren’t really controlled by us. Although Louisa and Elodie mentioned dreams could be controlled, which I had considered as well, I think it’s an exception, which is not natural or common.
- Olivia observed contained feathers (in the duvet) and the free/loose ones. I had thought about feathers in the duvet as well. I think it can be relevant because while sleeping in bed, that’s when I don’t have the conscious to feel empty/apart, and the feathers hold together as a whole.
- Elodie said this photo’s sexual because of the reclined position:

- Chalkie mentioned about Zeus – impregnation by light. I had not heard about it but it’s not the direction I want to go towards.
- Yash talked to me privately about her experience of depression because of loneliness. It’s heavy and it’s dragging her down. It’s like clouds just before pouring rain. I completely get that feeling, which I have sometimes. But what I’m trying to express is not really the same. The heaviness of depression and loneliness can be strongly felt, but emptiness is usually not so obvious. It’s when I don’t know what I want and what I feel, almost an absence of any feeling. But it’s really nice of her sharing her experience with me.
I’m not sure if I got anything specifically helpful from the critic and I still completely don’t know what to do next. I get the idea of ideas generated through process/practice, but I don’t think I’m able to do it with a tight deadline. I don’t know what to start with.